Could it be Magic?

Melanie looked up into the brownest eyes she’d ever seen. Wow! She wasn’t expecting him.

New Novel Beginning

Here’s the opening of a crime novel.  Or it could be a short story in its own right.  I wrote it for a competition, but it didn’t win, so rather than waste it I thought I’d share it here. Just a warning – it’s a wee bit sweary, so if you don’t like bad words,…